Wednesday, 25 February 2009

Translating Faiz

Aj tanhAi kisi hamdam-e-derin ki tarah
karne Ayi hai meri saqigari shAm dhale
muntazir baithe hain hum donon ke mahtab ubhare
aur terA aks jhalakne lage har sAye-tale

Loneliness like an old friend
turns up this evening to pour my wine
Together, we wait for the rising moon
to reveal your face behind every shadow.

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my translation of TanhAi by Faiz Ahmad Faiz

2 comments:

mystic rose said...

Very good with the translation. It reads almost as lovely as the verse itself, and that is quite an impossible task.

ishmi said...

lovely! :)